ds_aprilfools: Prompt 3 - secret lives

[leafy]

Title: The Peace Of The Present
Author: leafy22
due South, Frasers
Notes: Possible spoilers for 'Good For The Soul'

Prompt 3 - secret lives

The Peace Of The Present

I was taken on a cold day made warm by furs, laughter and togetherness.

I was carried between the pages of a journal, giving comfort on chilled and lonely nights.  Words of affection, longing and regret were murmured to me but I could not reply.

I was given when the moment was right.  The season was one of goodwill and forgiveness was possible.

Comments

[nos4a2no9.livejournal.com]

Wow, Leafy, this was really beautiful and haunting. It's so brief, but it carries this tremendous impact. I found I had to read it over several times before I could gather myself enough to comment. The italicized intros were beautiful, and I loved the contrast and the way you've captured three stages of Fraser's life. Just like a snapshot, every word perfect and the images so clear and heartbreaking. Lovely stuff, kiddo.

[lamentables.livejournal.com]

*is stunned*

Beautiful!

[spuffyduds.livejournal.com]

Oh boy. This was gorgeous and just--thumped me in the chest.

The idea that it had--soaked up, somehow, what Bob couldn't say in person but murmured aloud on the trail, that it maybe managed to transmit that to Fraser...wow.

And what a great title.

[leafy22.livejournal.com]

Hee - it makes me giggle when you call me 'kiddo'!

I'm glad you thought it was effective - there were other parts too until I said rather sternly "Self, not everything has to be F/K!" and cut it right back to essentials.

[leafy22.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[leafy22.livejournal.com]

Rubs your chest better but not in an inappropriate way, obviously! :-)

Yeah, I like the idea of the photo being an active link between them.

And my title thanks you!

[akamine_chan]

I love how much you've managed to capture with the least amount of words, leafy.

I like the idea of photographs holding more memories that just the picture.

[leafy22.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I think that photo is one of the most interesting things about that episode!